The Echo (Part 1)
- Nick Ho
- Nov 21, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 27

(Scene: The Control Room at Headquarters. YOU stand before a monitor, hands clasped behind your back. The large screen displays a news report on Raf's latest battle. A JUNIOR PILOT hesitates before approaching.)
Junior Pilot: Sir? A moment?
You: What is it?
Junior Pilot: You and Raf... you trained together, right?
You: Same academy. Same year.
Junior Pilot: What was he like?
You: Sharp. Focused. Always steps ahead.
Junior Pilot: Is that how he became the Ace?
You: He had the instincts. In the cockpit, he didn’t think—he just knew.
Junior Pilot: Sounds like a legend already.
You: Legends don’t make mistakes. Raf did, but he learned fast.
Junior Pilot: What about two years ago? When he disappeared?
You: He crossed the boundary. Chased something too far. For a month, we thought he was dead. Then he came back—wounded, missing parts of himself.
(→ Continue to The Echo (Part 2))
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