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The Bar (Part 1)

  • Writer: Nick Ho
    Nick Ho
  • Nov 15, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Jan 27

Bar scene with Raf and the bartender sitting on stools, dim lighting, neon signs, and bottles on shelves. The TV above them shows "THE RETURN OF A HERO PILOT".
"Without Raf, this whole place would’ve gone to hell."

(Scene: Midnight at a Dimly Lit Bar. The air hums with quiet conversations and the faint clinking of glasses. YOU sit at the counter, a half-empty glass in front of you.)


(The BARTENDER leans against the counter, eyes flickering between you and the TV overhead, where footage of Raf’s latest battle dominates the screen.)


Bartender: Look at that… took down an entire squadron this time. Guy’s more machine than man.


You: Quite the hero.


Bartender: More than that. He’s out there risking his neck while the rest of us rot in here, pretending the world isn’t burning. You ever serve?


You: In a way.


Bartender: Thought so. You’ve got the look—hard to miss. They say nobody’s better in the skies. Without Raf, this whole place would’ve gone to hell, from threats outside and… inside, too.


(→ Continue to The Bar (Part 2))


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