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Intrusion (Part 1)

  • Writer: Nick Ho
    Nick Ho
  • Oct 17, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Jan 27

Mia and the old man stand on an aircraft with a cloudy sky and another plane in the background. Blue lights accent the robot.
"He’s more than my creator. You know that."

(Scene: On the wing of an aircraft, soaring high above the clouds, the City of Surveillance below encased in a powerful force field. YOU stand at the edge, facing the unknown, while the OLD MAN stands behind you, watching with quiet concern.)


Old Man: I knew you wouldn’t change your mind. You’re just like him.


You: He’s down there, trapped behind that barrier. I’m the only one who can reach him.


Old Man: I know.


(You pause, looking out over the City, the shield flickering ominously below.)


You: You believe I can get through it, don’t you?


Old Man: I trust you. More than anyone else.


You: I won’t fail him—Not this time.


Old Man: Just as I care for him… I care for you, too, my dear.


You: He’s more than my creator. You know that.


(→ Continue to Intrusion (Part 2))


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