Intrusion (Part 1)
- Nick Ho
- Oct 17, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 27

(Scene: On the wing of an aircraft, soaring high above the clouds, the City of Surveillance below encased in a powerful force field. YOU stand at the edge, facing the unknown, while the OLD MAN stands behind you, watching with quiet concern.)
Old Man: I knew you wouldn’t change your mind. You’re just like him.
You: He’s down there, trapped behind that barrier. I’m the only one who can reach him.
Old Man: I know.
(You pause, looking out over the City, the shield flickering ominously below.)
You: You believe I can get through it, don’t you?
Old Man: I trust you. More than anyone else.
You: I won’t fail him—Not this time.
Old Man: Just as I care for him… I care for you, too, my dear.
You: He’s more than my creator. You know that.
(→ Continue to Intrusion (Part 2))
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